What's your biggest ''close call''


hungry pot , Monday, 9th of August 2010 02:37:29 AM

Grim Reaper

My oldest, dearest friend
Grim Reaper
How 
hungry pot
will you take me?
Your missing the chance,
many a daymakes me 
Registered User
not believe
l should've been in
dire-straights
the day l 
Joined: Sunday, 25th of April 2010, 10:57:39
wrecked my bike
just six years old,
strutting bold,
Posts: 270
/>reckless if you like
Now, what about,
when l jumped out
Viewed 16549 times
/>the second storie glass?
Once again,
my dearest friend/>you made the choice to pass
And it seems to me,
when at 
thirteen
l was drunk at daddys wedding
l drank enough to kill me 
off
but, woke
to the showers jetting
And l seem to recall 

a horrific fall
when skiing Suger Loaf
Battered, and 
bloody,
alone with nobody
And yet you missed the boat
Oh 
man, the train!
l almost forgot
Truely a chilling feat!
To 
race alongside
that screaming engine!
crossing barely
by 
the skin of my teeth!
Uh huh, but, the ,
yup should've done 
it
Remember? 1999?
All those pills,
all that drinkin', />geez what was l thinkin'?
Grim Reaper,
a true friend of 
mine....
 
 
 
 
 

Lady Grey , Tuesday, 10th of August 2010 06:06:48 AM

Great poem. It has humour and truth. Keep writing from what you  
Lady Grey
know, like this one.  
Registered User
 
Joined: Sunday, 2nd of May 2010, 16:52:34
 
Posts: 1984
 
Viewed 10336 times
 
 

Skitterz , Wednesday, 11th of August 2010 06:54:18 PM

Grim Reaper  
Skitterz
do you really see him as ur friend  
Registered User
Grim Reaper  
Joined: Sunday, 13th of June 2010, 05:31:44
Had he actually pass you by  
Posts: 1799
Grim Reaper  
Viewed 3176 times
Tell her you are no one is friend  
Grim Reaper  
Her time have not come by  
Grim Reaper  
You are but one of god is means  
Grim Reaper  
You have not paid a visit yet  
 
Hehehe I think you must be one of the lucky chosen one by god who have  
been bless with experiences of second chances for life over & over  
reminding you of when the time you have to go will come. A way of god  
reminding you how valuable life is & how hard it is to take away from  
someone god had given it to.  
 
 
 
 
 

PyroSquirrel , Thursday, 12th of August 2010 11:10:42 PM

Im sorry if this actually happened to you.  
PyroSquirrel
Everybiody makes mistakes.  
Registered User
The poem has a lot of feeling!'  
Joined: Wednesday, 16th of June 2010, 20:57:59
Keep Writting!  
Posts: 812
 
Viewed 14998 times
 
 
 
 

Spectacular =] , Friday, 13th of August 2010 01:00:59 PM

The lost condom episode!  
Spectacular =]
 
Registered User
 
Joined: Sunday, 2nd of May 2010, 13:01:55
 
Posts: 1601
 
Viewed 8947 times
 

Bitsy , Saturday, 14th of August 2010 11:54:18 AM

I fell about twenty feet onto rocks. I was scalped by the way I  
Bitsy
hit. I was in nowhere Guatemala with nothing. The risk of fatal infection  
Registered User
was very high. I had to clean it and fix it by myself.  
Joined: Tuesday, 4th of May 2010, 23:10:26
 
Posts: 839
 
Viewed 13309 times
 
 
 



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: 4 guests